Presentation You did good. Maybe make the presentation a little better by making it longer, ,ore explanatory. You seemed just a little neves.other than that good job
Presentation Observations Today's presentation you did was good. I like how you showed your understanding of the article and that you gave examples of what you had. Also, that you had confidence when you spoke. Though I think that you should slow down a bit when you speak.
Great job! Your presentation was very good today! It looked like you were a little bit nervous, but that's expected since this presentation was unexpected. Next time you present I suggest practicing a head of time, so you don't have to keep looking back at the screen. During the presentation you kept eye contact with the audience. Next time I suggest you keep a slower pace and explain more. Overall it was a great presentation though.
Presentation reflection Your presentation was good. You were very clear, but you looked at you blog most of e time and it was a bit on the short side. Overall, really good.
Your presentation i thought your presentation was pretty clear. You didn't seem nervous at all because you didn't fidgit or anything. Your tone was professional. You paced yourself well, and showed a clear understanding of how this relates to what we're learning in class. There weren't any major problems that stood out to me about your presentation, but just remember to look at the audience more, not at ms.held or the screen.
A5 RIHLA#2 Comment I think you did a great job stating your opinion to the class. I liked that you stood with what you thought was the right thing, fair pay between women. However, in your journal I think you could've explained more on the quote that you chose. Maybe next time try to say a little more about the journal.
Your presentation I thought the explanations of your thoughts were really good. There seemed to be a lot of time where you looked at the board. In the future try not to look at the board so much. Try to make eye contact with the audience a little more. Your body language was good. The pace was also good. I could tell that you fully understood the article assigned as homework. Don't forget to proofread what you write on your journal. Good job!
A5- RIHLA response I think that you had good information in your journal; however, when presenting, I feel thatnyou could take a little more time explaining your point and reasoning.
Presentation Patty I think you did a great job at presenting because not only did you not look nervous but you know your information. However, I would say to slow down your pace and give a little more information. Next time you should say give more of your opinion to get people intrigued. Also your body language could have been a bit better, just stand up straight. But overall I think you did a great job!
Commentary on RIHLA I feel that your presentation was ready. You gave a good summary of the article and gave specific qoutes. You clearly stated you position on the last question. Nice work.
reflection you were prepared and knew what you were talking about. Uh the only thing I would say is take your hands out of your pockets and don't rock so much. Other than that I don't really have any criticisms. Good job cakes.
Rihla #2 I think you did a good job at summarizing the article's main points. When you gave your opinion on the situation of women getting paid less than men you forgot to give specific evidence from the article to support your. Other than that you did a good job at answering all the questions. I agree with you by the way.
Presentation critique. Hey Patty,
Your presentation was really smooth and easy to understand. Also, I like the adjectives you used in your presentation because they helped me feel what you felt while reading this article. Overall, great job with your first presentation. :)
-Jazmin H
Rihla 2 presentation I had similar answers that you did. Your presentation went well. The only thing I would say to cange is your movement. Sone of you're body language can be seen as destracting so just make sure to move less. Your tone was very clear. A little more eye contact would be best.
RIHLA 2 Good presentation. One thing that could have been done is adding more details from the article and give examples of the article to any connections you would have.
She got to the point of what her article was about. She also spoke clearly when responding to the questions. However, one thing that can be I proved on is the usage of evidence. She could've used statistics to support her claim about women recieving more than males.
I agree with Patty when she says she would like to study the way Americans are viewed as. However, I disagree with the fact that there are many people in the world that care. I agree o. Part of this but the part I disagree with is that people aren't always trying to help out and care for them. It only reaches a certain amount of time and then they care less. They live the present.
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You did good. Maybe make the presentation a little better by making it longer, ,ore explanatory. You seemed just a little neves.other than that good job