RIHLA #3 Hello
Over all ur presentation was good the way u explain to the class made sence and connected to what we are learning in class..something u might work on is your tone make it more firm,hands out of pockets, also the way u position ur body make it more confident for the audience .good job after all
RIHLA #3 hey Cynthia,
I really enjoyed hearing about what you thought of the article. You seemed nervous but at the same time calm also.
If I were you I would be more descriptive and use more evidence.
Rihla 3 hey Cynthia, it\'s me Latifat. I just wNted to give you some feedback on your presentation to day. Think you id a pretty good job, howeve, I kind of wish that you took the liberty to look at the audience instead f looking at Ms.Held during your whole presentation. Other than that, you did a very good job.
Rihla #3 hey Cythia,
You did a good job going first today in the presentation. Next time you should not say the words umm alot because as you know we had a big problem last year in Ms. Kearns class.
Rhila#3 Hey Cynthia great job on your presentation for it being your first time and the first time overall. I don't think you should have did anything different besides add a little more information about the article. Other than that great job.
RIHLA#3 COMMENT Hello Cynthia,
I thought your presentation went really well. You seemed to know what you were talking about. You said \"like\" and \"uhm\" a lot. You should be more confident in what you say.
Rihla comments 3 nice and quick prevention. For next time I think that you should explain a little better and take a little more time. Look more at the group and the word choice should be a little more professional. Overall, great presentation.
RIHLA #3 I liked your connection to the untouchables to slavery because that was very similar to my connection. Next time I would just have a little bit more eye contact, but overall it was good.
I liked her point of view and she was very thoughtful with her questions. She could have explained a little further on the answers.overall, it was a very good rhila
Great Job. Hey Cynthia! I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed reading your Travel blog. I like that you said that you want to expand your views about the world. That too is the same reason that I am excited about this Travel blog project.
This should be fun,
Latifat Momson
RIHLA #1 Comment Morning Cynthia,
Your travel blog is looking solid! After reading your responses, I was left with a few questions for you to think about:
1. What do think the greater meaning of Hip Hop is for listeners?
2. Why do you think people (regardless of age), sometimes feel unaffected by big tragedies? How do we change that?
Keep up the good work & don't forget to proofread all responses.
Best,
Ms. Held
I am a senior at UICCP and am of hispanic decent. I'm a Chicago native and enjoy the city life. This year it's important for me study world history so I can expand my views about the world and learn about what's going on outside of my own country.... full info
Pablo Ramos
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great job on your presentation, but you can improve on cutting off the ummms.