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October 4th 2015
Published: October 4th 2015
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A golden shawl, blown from the shoulders of a woman on the back of a passing motorcycle, draped across a bush by the hand of an unseen artist.
On my first day teaching creative writing at Kathmandu University, I gave my students the following homework assignment. "Pick a color. Take a walk. Every time you see that color, write a sentence about what you see. The point of the exercise is to heighten your visual awareness, and then to translate what you see into words. Does everybody understand the assignment?" I asked. Nobody said a word, so I rephrased the question. "Is there anything about the assignment that you don't understand?" Still, no answer.



Class dismissed.



My practice is to do every assignment myself. So that afternoon I took a walk through KU Chowk, the small village that has sprung up along the road that leads to the university. I chose the color yellow, and using my cell phone cam, snapped a picture of everything I saw that was yellow.



I sat down and wrote a sentence for every picture and the next day went back to my class, looking forward to hearing what my students had written. Imagine my surprise then, when I discovered that not one of them had understood the assignment. One or two wrote a paragraph
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In a heap of trash, a yellow plastic bag smiles brightly.
of something they'd seen in their chosen color. The rest just blew it off altogether. During the break, I asked them to go take a walk and come back with some sentences. Once again, nobody got it. That's when I knew I'd have my work cut out for me teaching creative writing in Nepal.



Here are my sentences along with the pictures I took on my walk. There's a haiku-like quality to the writing that comes out of this exercise. For me, it's like writing one sentence poems. Hope you enjoy them.


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Three sagging sacks of concrete

Three yellow sacks of concrete sag against each other, ready to bind some bricks together.
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Nirvana

A young man walking by in a yellow tee-shirt with the sad-eyed face of Kurt Cobain emblazoned across his chest; can this really be Nirvana?
BeautyBeauty
Beauty

In the window of a beauty salon, the yellow labels on tubes of apricot scrub and papaya wash promise eternal youth and unending beauty.
LilyLily
Lily

A golden lily juts defiantly above the black horizontal of an electric power cable.
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Shakyamuni

I can't read the red and blue Nepali script, but the picture of people seated in meditation tells me this yellow banner has something to do with Shakyamuni.
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Smudged

The walls of the shop are a pastel lemonade, spotless towards the ceiling, smudged as far up as hands can reach.
Canary CupCanary Cup
Canary Cup

An enameled cup perches like a canary on a plate as if to eat the remains of someone's dinner.
MaizeMaize
Maize

Golden ears sunbathe on a burlap blanket waiting for that epiphanic moment when they'll become popcorn, or cornbread, or a heaping bowl of Kellogg's Corn Flakes.
BananasBananas
Bananas

Hanging on hooks from the ceiling of a small grocery shop, not one, not two, but seven bunches of ripe bananas.
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Caucasia

Right at the turnoff that leads to the K.U. Campus, there's a sign in brown and yellow announcing the Caucasia Cafe and Hotel, where you can get "Pizza, Burgers, Sandwiches, Lassi, and Organic Coffee and Tea," even if you're not Caucasian.
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Bus Butt

A big smokey bus zooms by and is gone almost before I can snap a picture of its receding yellow butt.


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