You have good information on Roman baths. I see that you were tying to condense the info to present. I think you should include a little bit more detail in your explanations.
A5-Brewer I think that you included a lot of good information in your Rihla about the Roman baths, and I think you did a good job explaining all of the aspects of bathing in ancient Rome
Constructive criticism Raquel,
You did an ok job. You knew what you were talking about, but you just needed a bit more confidence with what you were saying. Also, do not look at your iPad too much. Your speech issue was not much of a problem today, so that was good! However, you did say um a few times. Besides that, there is improvement!
- Sarah
presentation Rocky,
Your presentation flowed really well. There were a lot of facts and you explained it in order. Next time make sure you don't look at the screen as much, and try not to use works like "um" and "like."
RIHLA presentation Observation Hey Rocky, I think you did well on your presentation. It was interesting on how they all went to different rooms and they all had bathed together. Though sometimes the information was a little unclear, you also repeteted the phrase " another room" to much and said ummm a lot too. Just next time try not to say ummm a lot. But other than that you did well.
Presentation Hey Rocky! Good job presenting today. I thought your topic was really interesting. And I thought while presenting you knew what was on your RIHLA. Next time though perhaps you improve your posture. Overall I think you did a great job!
You did a good job presenting because you made the topic interesting with your excitement. The information you presented seemed accurate. However, one thing you can improve on is being less nervous by not laughing. Overall, the presentation was well.
Good job! Good job Rocky. You could tell that you had a lot of knowledge on the subject because you rarely looked at the screen. Next time I would suggest looking at the entire audience. You seemed to only look at Mrs.Held, but other than that your presentation was good.
Presentation critique hey rock star!
Great presentation! It really reminded me of what we learned in Latin class about the roman baths. Your presentation skills are getting better so yay! Just don't look so much at your iPad when presenting. Otherwise awesome and thanks for the lesson
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- jazmin
Hey Rocky,
I liked how you talked about the baths and even described the routine one undergoes through in the baths. A few things to improve on are the amount of movement you do. You kept on opening and closing your iPad cover, which was a little distracting. Also, try to avoid saying umm. Overall, good job!
presentation you did a pretty good job presenting.
You had a couple of ums, and you could have used better working for some things, but you didn't seem very nervous. You looked up most of the time to explain, which is essential. Nice job.
I think you didi a really great job on the information you gave and you had a lot of details. I just think you should try to cut back on using "um" a lot in your presentations. Overall, good job.
RIHLA #1 Comment Hi Raquel,
Nice work for your first journal. Something you mentioned in your RIHLA brought up an interesting point: "Many are not informed of the truth behind 9/11. In my opinion, it is the teacher fault since they choose what to teach the kids." This made me think of 3 questions.
1. Should teachers take on all the responsibility for teaching students the truth?
2. Do you think teachers are completely aware of what the truth is?
3. Do you think there are limits or restrictions to what a teacher can teach?
Just some thoughts.
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well first of all Rocky this Rihila #8