Rihla #4 review Hey Melanie,
I really enjoyed reading your blog and how passionate you are on help homeless people and you wish that things were better for them. I think what you need to work on is very minor and that is to give an experience to entrigue the reader a little bit more so they can relate to what you mean. Other than that, great blog!
Your BFF
Marissa
Thought on blog Hey Mel,
I really liked you thoughts about 9/11. Your opinions and thoughts about this event were interesting.Thanks for the info!!
- Emily:D
I like how you put the event on the top part of the blog. It gave a description and a quick review/main idea before the rest of the blog is presented. I also like the fact that you answered very thoughtfully the questions. You answered the questions in a great manner. Great job.
9-11 article Hey melanie!!!!
When I was reading your article I agreed in many things on what you said about young people reflecting critically about what happened in 9/11 and how we as Americans were affected by this event, and why things are the way they are. I'll have to admit that I'd don't agree with you on the part of young adults being affect by this serious event because all that young adults were doing was buying music and were in their own little world but I do agree on the part that all of us were affected diffrently than others who were personally affected.
Hi, My name is Melanie and I am a high school senior at UIC College Prep. I am a curious citizen of the world. I am interested in all the wonders the world has to offer such as different cultures, foods, people, and sites. This is also the reason why it is important for me to study World History this year. By studying World History I will get a better sence of different places in the world and understand the history. ... full info
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Great job at expressing your ideas
i liked how you expressed your views on homeless people. Even though they are on the rise.