That was great Seriously, I enjoyed the writing Loren. I like how you make everything sound so desolate. Maybe it was the mood you were feeling but even if it wasn't it was rad. Well done.
Wow, Loren! I had no idea the islands were that exciting! Your writing and descriptions make me want to explore it for myself. You have an incredible way with words, inviting the reader to create pictures and links in their mind. Great job!!
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That was great
Seriously, I enjoyed the writing Loren. I like how you make everything sound so desolate. Maybe it was the mood you were feeling but even if it wasn't it was rad. Well done.