Hi :) our blog is really cool! so glad you didn't get married to that stranger. You are worth so much more than 5 camels.... The blog is really good, maybe improve on your description detail, it's really good however it gets a little overpowering at times!
Best wishes
Don't get married off by accident to a man who bought you for 5 camels. (It's not exactly a compliment is it? 'Mary me, I think you are worth 5 Camels.....' he must have been pretty desperate to get married....)
WOW!!!! Hey Gigi! Loved reading your blog on your trip to Egypt. I managed to find out quite a lot about Egypt from this, and as well as inspiring me to visit Egypt someday, you really entertained me too!! Keep the blogs coming in! You're doing a great job! Love from Sarvikaa xx
Little One for 5 Camels :) Hi! Gigi, i was just browsing through some profiles when i came across yours. I enjoyed reading your report and found it quite amusing how this old guy offered 5 camels in exchange for you. Wonder what you missed! Have you ever thought of comming to Sri Lanka. I think you will find it amazing! Best Wishes. Sanjeeva
Well done :) That was a really good first post! You are getting used to writing for a blog - it's different to essay writing, don't you find? After a few more posts you will start to find a style that works for you - my blog posts didn't ever have a high verbal IQ, but yours is a mix :) If you want constructive criticism, maybe try to stick to formal language, as that is what I associate with travel writing, but with a few jokes?
TTYL,
kk xxx
Aria
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our blog is really cool! so glad you didn't get married to that stranger. You are worth so much more than 5 camels.... The blog is really good, maybe improve on your description detail, it's really good however it gets a little overpowering at times! Best wishes Don't get married off by accident to a man who bought you for 5 camels. (It's not exactly a compliment is it? 'Mary me, I think you are worth 5 Camels.....' he must have been pretty desperate to get married....)